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I decided to go for a simpler design for the volcano god. Instead of semi-realistic flames, I came up with these simple graphic swirls to simulate flames. The self-critical angel sitting on my shoulder says that the sun god looks too old. What am I going to do about that tomorrow?

Well, the first thing I’ll do is make the eyes rounder and move them further apart. I’ll give the eyebrows and evil tilt, and I’ll make the nose wider, too — cats have a very wide bridge of the nose. After I fix those problems, I’ll work on the expression — right now he looks like he’s retired from the volcano god business.. I want my volcano god to have an impish and vindictive expression.